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The poem uses a simple alliteration making it seem light and bouncy but this is juxtaposed with rather sombre verse.
As ever I do not see it as entirely negative, there is hope in the words, even though it was written when I was quite bitter at people for continually abusing my trust and fiendship.

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The picture is fantastic! It's a sad little ditty though. It sounds like it'd make a really nice song or someting.

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"Brains..." "Cookie?" "Cookie!"
:icongillham-san:
It meant to have a simple limmerick feel, so it could be sung, yeah.
I do these kinda stupid things every so often but this one still works for me. (^_^)

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'Modern art is what happens when painters stop looking at girls and persuade themselves they have a better idea.' - John Ciardi

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